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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Adrenaline

    AMAZING! One of the best works I ever read on YWS. This was perfect :D Nike :)

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Sketches? Photos?

    these are really great! I love them. Great job :) Nike :)

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Across The Pond Chapter 2

    okkkay. i know why no one is commenting here. the story is just SO long that it just scares the reader like "ah!!!" you gotta cut it into parts or ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Torn Veil (Part 2 of 3)

    this was nice but it kind of made me stop liking it. i think that the MC is selfish at this moment and no one wants that. very nicely written ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Laundry Love

    This was cute! I love it, but its incomplete! finish it i wanna know what happens next. You made me caught on this book-you cant just leave it unfinished we ...

    May 26, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Field Trip (2)

    “Gosh-really it’s just Will ,” I get off the chair and walk up to Ashley’s pink hearted closet. It’s a walk in and the lights are in stars on the ...

    May 26, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Azaleas for Susie

    Oh My God. You made me cry!!!! It Was perfect just perfect and very sad. At first i thought "What? Did she kill her?" but then it said that she ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: We Will Make It Through.

    okay... Hi! I'll review your song today! I thought that it was nice. At some parts I lost my place and had to look back-It makes sense but I couldn't ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My Best - Photography

    Hi! These are amazing pictures! Really i loved them-just the first two didn't catch me. But overall amazing photos! Keep on taking pictures-you are really good at it! Nike :)

    May 25, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Torn Veil (Part 1 of 3)

    I really liked this! I can't wait for the other parts!!! I agree with the writers above me about the editing though. Something really bugs me-why cant the MC just ...

    May 25, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (3)

    great-just more description!!! really great! Nike :)

    May 24, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (2) (edited)

    I completly guessed that the guy that Emily bumped into was the guy Marissa likes. It was easy to find out. But i like it. The action is very great!! ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (edited)

    I loved it! i'm so caught onto it. But the writers above me are right too. It's great-it does need editing thouigh in description and well alot of it. Keep ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: That FAll Day

    I have a different opinion-this was very catchy. If this were a book then i would read it. But you must eit some parts like the writers above me said. ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Unknown Name (Sorry)

    I agree with the writers above me. The whole idea is amazing and th story is really good. Your description is lacking and i did get lost i many parts. ...

    May 24, 2010


Patience is the strength of the weak, impatience is the weakness of the strong.
— Immanuel Kant, Philosopher