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Oh my gosh- I love it! It's hilarious! Nike :)

okay, Hi babygirl12! When I first saw the title, I thought someone re-wrote the real song by Natasha Bedingfield or they just chose the same title and wrote something familular ...

hi Litehawk. This piece is very different than the rest I have read before. I don't usually stop by Lyric Poetry until I say this one. It is nice but ...

i loved it- it was cute and unique. Please keep on writing but do edit some parts that the writers above me mentioned. Nike :)

Chapter 2 Most summer days I love to dress in sweats and relax. But today was a different story-it was July’s birthday. That’s why her parents named her July because ...

I keep typing new books because I get better ideas-so I write a new story to interact with the idea. Please tell me what you think of it, i'm very ...

this is nice. love it! Keep writing! Nike :D

hi! I agree with KD 100%. You do have many errors and your pace is way too fast-sometimes I was completely confused! Some words were spelled wrong and didn’t even ...

Wow, this is hilarious! I love it! Nike :)

This has a great start. But you need to be aware of your tences- you sometimes go from past tence to present to future and you can't do that. You ...

this is great but you need more description-it feels as if the characters are standing and talking in nothing. Some words are spelled wrong or you missed some. The truth ...

great it's beautiful! Nike :)

Great- im agreeing with the writers above me. This is very interesting but you sometimes mix up the names, check that out. And in the begining you wrote Mickey; teenage ...

these are amazing! The snow on the branches are nicely taken in the picture. I love them. Nike :)

great-you should edit the parts the readers said above me- i hate repeating. loved it! Nike :)