Nike

When I first looked at this I was like WOW! This looks huge! You should split stuff up a little so it could look more appealing... I'll read it again ...

I enjoyed this piece. you were right with the whole description thing- you need to add more of it. The story was cute and enjoyable! You should write another part! ...

I love this! It's cute! I agree with the writers above. Keep Writing! Nike :)

hellooo. I got your PM so I'll review it! So, this is a bit confusing. First of all-- you change your tenses from past tense to present. Some of the ...

this is so cute! I loved it. But you should split this up into verses and choruses because I dont know how this goes. but other than that this was ...

These are amazing! I love he last two pictures the most! Nike :)

Hi! Welcome to YWS. I hope that you will have a great time here! Now to reviewing... I wasn't really excited to red this because of the length. You didn't ...

this is cute! I loved it! Keep Writing! Nike :)

I agree with Ladynagrom. You should edit the parts she marked. I thought that it was boring. I heard this same knd of story. You should pop something in here ...

Hello! I'm gonna review your story today! I'm Nike. The bold red are my comments. That summer was the beginning. It was when I began. Began to listen, to see, ...

Chapter 3 July didn’t go to the party because she thought that I was kidding. She thought that I was gonna surprise her by bringing the senior’s here. Why did ...

I loved this! The desciption was brilliant! It was a bit boring and not refreshing. alot of people write about the beach. Edit the parts the writers above me mentioned. ...

helllo. I know why you aren't getting many comments. The story is a little dead. We've read it all before. Try to spruse it up and at a little suprise ...

I agree with Jet on everything. It's a whole different story then others write. I like it because of the difference from different stories. But you should edit some parts ...

*** I’m on the phone with July. She just won’t shut up about David. “So-I ask for the one-hundredth time , do you wanna go to Josh’s party?” I cut ...