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This is soooo cute!

Hi. This is cute! You should edit the story a bit by re-reading it because you have spelling mistakes-- but Tiffany (the writer above me) pretty much says it all. ...

Hello! Here to review the second part! *pulls out red pen* GET READY! Blue = corrections Red = things I like Teal = nit picks I deleted the parts I ...

so a question:You know where it says above your picture "Senior Writer" or something like that-- how can you change it? I've seen people have something else written over there. ...

Welcome!

Hiya! I'm Nike! *waves* It's great to see someone new on this site! I hope you enjoy YWS... You can check out my works if you'ld like! And if you ...

LittlePrincess--this is a continued story to Totally Strange (1). It says alot in there! Thanks for commenting though I'll edit!

Chapter 2 I was lying in bed feeling dizzy. My eyes travelled around my room noticing that it was still dark out. I got up checking my digital clock. It ...

I loved this!!!! It wasn't really original because of the whole "I feel for my sister's boyfriend" thing-- and I've read something like that before. But It was original frm ...

Hi! I agree with Smashles. This isn't fantastic. But it's okay. I really think this is just like a 7 year old wrote it-- so it makes sense with what ...

Hello... I'm here to review like you requested! So, I don't peek into the Fantasy section on YWS but I'll give it a try. (I didn't even read a whole ...

Chapter 4 I’m typing away on my computer. I write a bit but not often. My story hasn’t been going well for this past month. I think I’ve got writer’s ...

I rang the doorbell which was next to a huge black wooden door. It was cold that night and many cars were on the driveway. I could hear music coming ...

This is amazing! I love it. The whole 'hopeless romantic' thing is great! You can edit some things by re-reading it and what L5na2 said. Keep Writing! I hope you ...

these are great! I bet your brother will or does love them! I think that these are very different from any other set of playing cards. Taking some pictures from ...