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Re: No News Is Bad News
Hi! This was amazing. I liked it that you placed the scene in the hospital. I don't know where the romance is, but i think that you will show it ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Prolouge: Dead Love
Whoa! This is deep. I agree with Torigirl15!You should edit ehat she mentioned. This is great, I hope you write more Keep Writing! Nike:)
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: My Pencil
This is so cute! I love it! Nike :)
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Totally Strange (3)
Chapter 3 It was around four o’clock pm when I was sitting on a chair at my party. Everyone was having fun but me. I don’t know why I felt ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Totally Strange (2 part 2)
jenrique umm, i'm confused with this comment. I got mixed signals from it. What do you mean? Do you like it? Or hate it? Or making fun of it? sorry ...
Aug 31, 2010 -
Re: I Kept A Secret From You
Amazing... i agree with the writers above me --i don't wanna repeat things! Keep Writing! Nike :)
Aug 31, 2010 -
Re: Please Numb My Pain
Hey Writer! I'm Nike... here to review! First Impression I liked it. Everyone loves the story of a best friend love, like for example: Shows: Ugly Betty, Hannah Montana. Books: ...
Aug 31, 2010 -
Re: Deleted.. :(
I know this is my second comment to this story. But i wanted to mention something else. I completly agree with borntobeawriter. You don't appreciate the time and effort we ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: My Biggest Fear
Three Words: Oh My God. This is amazing! I loved it so much! No edits... this is wow! Keep Writing! Nike :)
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: Deleted.. :(
Hey kakagirl! First time in Romance... that's great that you decided to try! For your first time this is great! I loved the plot and concept of the story. I ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: Totally Strange (2 part 2)
The surroundings of the kids completely melted away. I fell into Vince world, but I shook my head so I wouldn’t land there again. “I have a surprise for you.” ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
I loved it so much! It pulls you in! This is a great piece --but you should edit some more parts like the writers above me mentioned. There needs to ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Outsmarted - Prologue
Hello! wow, this is a mystery. It's a great prologue, it just pulls you in. But the writers above me are right too! Keep Writing! I wanna see more! Nike ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Atlantic Prep
Hey, this is Miami Prep isn't it?
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Miami Prep
Hi! I liked it-- it's a great start to the begining. I can't wait for more! I agree with ace1996. She was right about everything in her review. I hate ...
Aug 6, 2010
