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Okay. I understand the crash part. I really do. I understand that's it's for English class! But, it's great. I hope that you got a good gradefor it. Keep Writing! ...

Wow. this is great. But it doesn't seem like a short story, it sounds like a novelle. I think that ou should make it a book. This pulled me in! ...

Hello Addawen! All I have to say is: this is amazing. Maybe the end where he got shot you should make it seem like slow motion (my suggeststion thats it). ...

Ok. Hi I'm Nike. I ead this. Its confusing. Really confusing. You sould re-read this and maybe even READ somethin to see how a book should be written. The talkin ...

Wow. Can I ask you a question? Can you write more of this?! I love it! Keep Writing! Nike :)

Dear Toby, My day went by like a speeding bullet. Wake Up. Bathroom. Breakfast. School. Walk home. Homework. Bed. Really this is how I go on my daily life. Friends? ...

Hello. I liked it but it was connfusing. It went way to fast. There was a plot but you gotta build it up. I know that you're not writing a ...

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I loved this! It was amusing and great! I'm writing for the contest too. I wish you luck! Keep Writing! Nike:)

Hi. I read this in a hurry. You should re-read this and edit big time. Sometimes you just made t go too fast and there are no feelings. MORE DESCRIPTION!!!!!! ...

Your story is about a football player in Chicago creating random poems Yesterday I was playing against the Villas. Our opponents were one of the best teams in Chicago, so ...

All I have to say is one word: WOW. This was good. I really loved it! Keep Writing! Nike:)

Alright. Since you are new here this will be fun. I liked the piece, it had potential. But you really gotta add description! You got to add it in the ...

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry for the caps, it was just so great! Keep Writing! Nike :)

Hello... I loved these pictures. They are amazing! You should do more like this, you've got talent! Nike :)