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Re: Hate or Love? *edited*
I wrote this just because not really caring what is right or wrong. Can you comment please? Hate isn't the word I should be using. It's just too strong. Maybe ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Friendship Reunion prt.1 *edited*
My heart couldn't stop beating quickly. I was sitting at my desk, watching my hugest crush stand at the front of the class. He was showing us his project on ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Comment L'Amour: An Epic Romance in List Form
i dont know what's going on here. Is it a poem???? Nike :)
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: The Tiger, The girl, The boy and The face
These are great drawlings! Nike :)
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Sweetheart (Chapter 1)
I liked this! This is an interesting book. But you should add description. I don't know how the MC even looks ike! Maybe when he looked at the mirror you ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: Together
this is nice. It pulls the reader in! Keep Writing! Nike :)
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: Peter (Part I)
Wow. This is crazy long. You've got to put it into chapters or at least parts! No one will bother reading everything all at once. What I thought of it? ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Apologizing
This is the perfect love sorry! I love it! It's just perfect. Keep Writing! Nike :)
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Inner Beauty
hello GiutarGirl. Here to review! To tell you the truth, I loved this! It's so cute! I don't wanna repeat anything so I'll just say I agree with the writers ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Teenager's World (1)
My face looked back at me in the mirror. I saw my long dirty blond hair sticking at every end and my eyes were slowly closing from tiredness. It was ...
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: Stupid writer's block.
loved it! *Nike clicks like* AWESOME! Nike :)
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Stupid writer's block.
loved it! *Nike clicks like* AWESOME! Nike :)
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Way Out
This is beatifully written and sad. I couldn't pull myself out! Keep Writing! Nike :)
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: First chapter of an unamed work
Hi. I'm Nike. I see that you're new here! I hope that you have fun on YWS. Anyway let's get talking about your novel. Hm, *scratches head* this is LONG. ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: My Essay From 7th Grade
Hello! I wanted to write something like this actually! This is great and true. You should write stuff like this more often! Keep Writing! Nike :)
Sep 26, 2010
