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Wow, this is beautiful. Really, no edits. I love it! Keep Writing! Nike :)

Tell you the truth, I do not like this. Great Idea --but no plot. Have you ever thought of PLOT and MORE DESCRIPTION? You've got to do that. This is ...

Hi! I'm here for just a second cause I gotta run. But, I love the idea. The beggining I don't like. I don't know who's he or she and the ...

Explosive_Pen: Thanks! Uh, my character is a girl. I'm Polish too. Persephoneia: Thanks, i'll edit as much as i can!

Just because I don’t speak this language very well. Just because I might not write every word write. Just Because I’m not from here. They disrespect me. They don’t accept ...

This are okay. They aren't the best. I don't like the second picture! Nike :)

Hi! I'm Nike! Good I've got some time to review this lovely piece. Chapter 1: The dream “Hello there.” said a voice that sounded sweet and gentle. “Oh, Hello” the ...

Hi! I'm Nike. I hate repeating things so all I'll say is: I agree with the wirters above me. You had many grammer and spelling mistakes so you should edit ...

Hi wickedwonder! I'm Nike, I'm here to review. If I'm a little harsh, it's just to help you :D Its a journal entry, one of my first. Go gentle-ish, please. ...

One wrd that describes this beautiful piece: Amazing. Keep Writing! For sloppy, this is goooood. Nike :)

Hi Lindsey! I'm Nike. If you want help or just to talk then PM me anytime! Nike :) WELCOME and have fun on YWS :P

Hi! I'm Nike. I have to say, this was good... Really good.I loved it. If you want me to review anything then PM me. Keep Writing! Nike :)

Whoa! I love this chapter!!! Keep Writing! Can you inform me when your next chapter is coming? And can you check out my short story: Prom Disaster I'm So happy ...

I chewed on my favorite polar ice gum as everyone round me danced. The music pounded. I was waiting for my best friend, Caron, to join me. She was flirting ...

Cute! I like it! Keep Writing! Nike :)