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Re: I love you (final edit)
Hi. Read your story. And to tell you the truth, I didn't like it. Some people will, some people wont. But it's just so confusing! Your spelling is sometimes worng ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: New Year's Romance
Aw, this is so cute and touching. *whips tear* Wow, this is amazing! Keep Writing! Nike :)
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Lie To Me~1
Hiya. Well, nice plot, I don't like it when Nate kills himself though, it's just really sad. But since it's part of the story, make a back flash. We really ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: hi
Hi YoungNate!!!! I'm Nike, and welcome to Young Writers Society! You're going to have a great time here! So, here are some questions. What is your favorite color? Do you ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: I Hate Him *4* Part 1
Chapter 4 The November sky was sending down a whole storm of snow. I shut my eyes, trying to protect them from the cold wind. My feet were getting soaked ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Paris
Hi, I viewed your piece here. To be honest, I didn't like it. I liked it a little bit but it still didn't pull me in. The writing is great, ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: I Hate Him *3*
Chapter 3 I tapped my pencil against the gray desk hearing a tap every time it hit the surface. The teacher was blabbing on about Shakespeare’s history. We were reading ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: The Feeling of Christmas
Hi! I found your title interesting so I popped on this page. I read the story, nicely written, great description, but lack of describing the MC. So, you're saying that ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Random christmas story :)
This is so funny and cute. You should write more stories that are like this. But, I didn't like it how the elves sued Santa! Hey, it's your story, it's ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: You and I (prologue and Chapter One)
Beautiful, very well described. I loved it, really amazing. Keep Writing! Nike :) Happy Holidays!
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Prom Disaster *2*
I was meaning to post a second part, but took forever. It just finished wrong, didn't it? Well, here it is --enjoy! Part 2 I cleared my throat and watched ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Beginning of 'The Inbetween'
Hi! I liked the story, but where's the romance? If you're continuing, than okay... we'll wait for the romance! Keep Writing! Nike :) P.S.- Tell me when you add moe ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Romeo and Juliette: Twisted (1)
Hi. I never really ever read Romeo & Juliette but I plan too. I think that this is beautifully written, great discription... but there's ALWAYS a But: I hate the ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Christmas Magic *part 2*
My heart beat a mile faster as I walked towards the front door. It swung open and my Uncle waved me in. I walked faster but started to slip. The ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Hello Everyone!
Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here! PM me anytime for any reason! Nike :)
Dec 16, 2010
