Nike

HAPPY REVIEW DAY!!!! *clears throat* alright then, that was awkward... oh well. I'm here to review this lovely new piece! color - comments color - spelling/grammer color - edits overall ...

This was actually a fun chapter to write, so I hope that you enjoy it! Chapter 9 I stood in the center of my room and slid on my red ...

Hint hint: I got this idea from my favorite TV show Phil Of The Future, that has been sadly canceled like four or five years ago... so I hope you ...

Here to review this piece. I'm trying to sound formal here, I think that was bad... Well, I'm here so, let's get started! Charlie I used to hate tying my ...

Wow! This was really good! I can't beelieve that you actually wrote something like that, I'm not saying that you couldn't, you could obviously... But this is really clever! Write ...

My favorite drawing is the last one, of Jock. It's so cute! I can't judge here on any of the drawings because I'm a writer, but I've gotta say these ...

I love the drawings! I'm no artist or anything, but these are really good! Nike :) Keep On Drawing!

I liked this, a lot. This story is very nicely written and the plot is unique! I wanna see more of this!!!! Nike :) Keep Writing!

Chapter 8 “Alright class, welcome back to Science class,” Mr. Kleparski greeted. He was our Science teacher, obviously. He’s cool like our Polish teacher. But, I’m not so good in ...

Chapter 7 My mom paced back and forth through the living room. Her face was tomato red and she yelled at us. Her anger bounced off the navy walls and ...

My second review of your stories... hope I won't be as harsh this time. :D I wake up the next morning with my room cleaned. Okay, show us the clean ...

Hey! I'm here to do my set of reviews! I will be a bit harsh since you are a starter writer. color - delete color - help color - edits ...

I tapped my pencil against my desk. thump, thump, thump. "Okay class, blah blah blah..." that's all I pretty much heard Mrs. Franklin say. My notebook was open and some ...

Chapter 6 Harry was outside, next to his Audi dressed in a huge, puffy coat. When he saw me looking at him, he smiled from ear to ear. I opened ...

Welcome to YWS! You seem really cool, I was excited by your title and was afraid that I wouldn't understand anything... ha-ha. So If you need anything, just PM me. ...