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  • Other Poetry Re: You

    I like this poem. It has great emotion and detail. This sent me a message, to never give up in this kind of situation. It's great. It tells a small ...

    May 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Strings

    Oh my gosh. This is beatiful and sooooooooooooooooooooo sad. But, I loved it with all my heart. You did have some spelling mistakes though, those things are like a rash ...

    May 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Are you rejecting me?

    Wow, I love this. It's emotional and beautiful :D I really enjoyed reading this piece. Write more like this. Keep Writing! Nike :)

    May 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Story I Can't Say

    I want to tell you this. But, I'd rather put it in a story, then maybe you'll get it. Why don't we say Alice is me. And Ash is you. ...

    May 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I Might Just Surprise You.

    This big thing. It's pretty big. The world sees it, feels it, scents it,and even smells it. You can hear it as well. It's a feeling that no one expresses ...

    May 10, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Those Times

    Hey, I loved this songfic (it's the first one I've ever read). i felt like the MC was actually telling me a story. This was emotional and beatifully written. Keep ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: PLAIN JANE

    Hello Commando Green Panda! I'm Nike! It's super-duper-ali-uper nice to meet you. Having a new member is great. YWS (Young Writers Society) is an amazing site for aspiring authors (like ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager

    This poem made me think of a teenage stereotype. But I loved it anyway. My favorite part was when you wrote "Acne-ridden soul", it was very creative. Keep Writing! Nike ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: I Hate Him Chapter 16

    Chapter 16 Standing on the side walk, I noticed a dozen cars parked in front of her house. I guess this party’s huge, like really huge. My heels clicked against ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: I Hate Him Chapter 15

    Chapter 15 I leaned against the gym seat watching Harry. He was flirting with this one cheerleader as she stood there waiting to audition for the team. Georgie was actually ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Jerk

    Just Because, You Say. You Spread All Those Lies, Lettin' People believe You. Feelin' No Guilt At All. Sometimes I Ask Myself, "Does He Have A Soul?" or "Does He ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Thoughts of a Compulsive Liar

    I loved this story, it had attitude and... I don't know, it just had something that brought it to life. What you wrote was witty, and "truthful". Keep Writing! Nike ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Coward's Way Out

    Hola, Skins! I personally found this story interesting and emotional. I actually cried a bit :). I say this is one of your best short stories yet. But, you must've ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Forget Him

    Ha. This is normal. Kind of like a habit. No one likes habits. Especially yours. All you ever do is laugh your head off, as if there was no tomorrow ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm new

    Hey, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy this site, we are all nice people ha-ha. If you have any stories or whatever you wanna post on here, just tell ...

    Apr 16, 2011


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— Nikki Morgan