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Re: The Mathematician Problem
Your story is about a mathematician in a pineapple under the sea borrowing a pencil. Every Monday night, I practice my math skills for my next class that I have ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: A Dream
Hey, you asked for a review so I came. I loved this so much. The story is really great. You gave great description and I could feel the MC's feelings/emotions. ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: I Can't Believe It
So, I stood there. Ready to take the plunge. Ready to do something other girls wouldn't. Normally, The guy should do this, that's why. But, 86% of guys expect the ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Boulder On My Shoulders
Okay, here's my theory. You wanted it, right? Well actually I don't even know. But anyway, here it goes. I like you and I act as if I don't. That's ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Blank
Hi, Polina! I'm here to review, yay! This story was full of adrenaline and emotion. It was better than any one of mine! But, you had some grammer issues, and ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Hello, YWS buddies:)
Hey Polina! I'm Nike, and I'm very excited to meet you! You've published a book already, wow, that's great! You sound very interesting and I can't wait to get to ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Ahoy!
Hey Andrea! I'm Nike! i hope you start to use your account again and post some great things on YWS. I actually can't wait to review something of yours. I ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Prologue (new)
Hey there Icy, It's me Nike! since you sent me the PM of your club, I deicided to read the book (I never read it before, sorry). Well anyway, I ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Running
This is very emotional and nice. I liked the way you wrote it, with such passion. This was so beautiful. Keep Writing! Nike :)
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Nostalgia in the Afternoon (Song Prompt Contest)
This is so cute and very romantic. You did the song justice! :D:D I loved this so very much. Keep Writing! Nike :)
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Can you review???
[Vick107/quote] “Taylor please hurry, we’ll be late!” Who said this? It was my mothers first day at her new job and my first day at my new school. I’ve been ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Dear Paper
Dear Paper, Let me tell you something... We're like paper, two pieces of paper, we need glue or tape to stick together. But sometimes that glue isn't there to save ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Soak Up The Sun: Chapter 1: Sun Rays
Finally! Summer hit us sooner than soon. Yes, it is June sixteenth, but it's still summer. I slammed my locker door, proud of the emptiness I left inside it. Teens ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
I am actually reading Romeo and Juliet in my literature class and thought that this was just hilarious!!! You still put the whole idea of the novel but you got ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Not an Angel from Above
Wow, this is inspirational. I loved every word in this poem. Great job. The emotion was perfectly set for this. Amazing. Keep Writing! Nike :)
May 10, 2011
