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Re: I Hate Him.
Hey guys, I did add to the story!!! It's actually a novel. I have it on my user under the folder I Hate Him. Go ahead and read it. It's ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: "Happy" Halloween
On this day --night, all the secrets open up. Every Ghoul. Every Ghost. Ready for the hunt. All the children, covered in lies. Showing their alter ego throughout the dark ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: The Review Bureau;)
Can you review my newest entries like I Hate Him or something like that. Thanks! I'm sorry I didn't review yours, it's just I've been busy but not only that, ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: It was only one date.
Hola! I'm trying Spanish here :D Okay, I read this short, very short, story. There's nothing really here that I could actually edit since it's so short. Overall I thought ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: You
Hola, I wrote this during class and I have no clue if it's any good. So, please review!!! I have three pieces here. What I underlined are new poems they ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: if life could just have UNDO button....!!!
Okay, Hi youngtalentkritz. To tell you the truth, this was... um, confusing. I didn't understand this at all. LIke, yeah sure, I understood the plot but it was too fast. ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: One in Every Class
I read this over during school from boredom ha-ha but I really loved this! It really connects to other youngsters out there with the same problem. Jared is a jerk, ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: For the Boy Who Sits In Front of Me in Science
Ohmygosh, sorry but I'm touched by this piece. It's great. You put in the perfect amount of emotion. A lot of teenagers get this problem, and with your words you're ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Hello (:
Hi Savannah!! Welcome to this amazing world called Young Writers Society (YWS)! I'm Nike, fellow writer. Today is Review Day so a bunch of us are busy, well, reviewing others ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P-- part 6
Hi, I'm Nike from team TARDIS here to review! I was meaning to read this story earlier but never got the chance to, SORRY! I really am! But now I'm ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Addiction
Hi, I'm Nike from Team TARDIS here to review! I read this short fella', it was short and sweet. I wrote something about Addiction before, and your piece was better ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter One
Hi, I'm Nike from team TARDIS here to review! – Chapter One – Ignoring my shaking feet I descended upon the swinging rope bridge, trying not to look down. In ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Drivers Never Sleep (possible title)
Hi! I'm Nike from the TARDIS team here to review! “I’m dancing in the street. I’m d-d-dancing.” My intoxicated friend sang as she twirled like a five year old, in ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Can You Find Waldo's Body on CNN?
Wow. This is deep. I felt the anger, the passion for anger. I don't usually review poems, but I couldn't stop myself from this one. I love it!!!! The way ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Miss Spoiler
This is hilarious yet annoying. I like it, giving some spunk to writing/reading! But seriously, Miss Spoiler, you gave us no spoilers... :D I want to see more of this ...
Aug 25, 2011
