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Re: The Real World
Hello there! I'm Nike, well obviously by my name. xD Reading this I thought it was choppy and mixed up. Not messed up, mixed up. I think some sentences were ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: Fear
Many people have fears. They come and go like the oxygen in your system. You can't escape it, but you can over come it. Well, if you over come oxygen, ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: The Junk Shop
Hello, Priceless! And just to clarify, this story was priceless. I fell in love with it. It wasn't like any other one, it was different. It may be because I ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: To Relive A Dream *Preview*
I wrote this in Homeroom, so I didn't get a chance to actually finish! But this is a new story I thought of (like always) I always think of new ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Rename The User Above You
Whatcha' Doin...?
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: How Hard It Is To Want Someone
Hello, I'm Nike. Today I stopped by your poem because of your avatar. It's so cute! I love the Little Mermaid ha-ha. Anyway, here's my review. I don't really review ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Once Upon A Wish
Hi, I'm going to review your piece. It's short and sweet. Let's start. We located our swim bags, sitting next to each other on the curb. "Next time, I'm gonna ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Rate the avatar above you! [5]
8/10 its nice because of the rainbow and music notes *I love music* but it's really simple. You should try to find something original. :D
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: An Ugly Girl
Hello fellow writer. I know why this is a featured work... it's beautiful. This story has a bowl full of emotion. It's captivative and thoroughly detailed. I feel in love ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Have you ever met a YWSer?
I've met my brother and cousin - they have users on here but I do'nt remember their usernames. Nike :)
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Cold Night
Hey!! It's Nike, here to edit like you requested. On that cold, silent night When you forgot you loved me You closed your eyes and thought of me But didn’t ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Completely new... :)
Hi, SlightlySenile! I'm Nike, a fellow Young Writer. How are you today? It's HALLOWEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Since you're new, I can help you out with anything and everything. So if you want ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Hear No Silence
Hey! At first, when I saw the title, I thought this was going to be something a bit frightening. But, to my surprise, it wasn't. The fact that it wasn't ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: All Hallows Eve
Hi! We're getting right to the review. I enjoyed this poem. I'm not a poem person, I'm not the best example for a poet. But, I decided, why not? It ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: The Boy Named Suffering
To tell you the truth, I enjoyed this piece. It brought a new light into this picture perfect world. You see, many people write about this having a happy ending, ...
Oct 31, 2011
