Nightshade

-I love the intensity and the fact that the anger and attitude never fades throughout the entire poem. -If this poem is meant to push people to understand your point ...

Great poem. The comparison between death and winter allows the meaning to be really deeply understood. I also really like the section in which the writer is speaking directly to ...

Excellent use of imagery. It took a couple of read-throughs to pick up on and understand all of the different symbolic elements. The only section I'm not sure about is ...

Interesting poem. I've always been fascinated by the idea of angels. My main suggestion would be to play around some with the formatting. Try splitting it into chunks of four ...