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Re: Little Questions and Thoughts Outloud
Nice job! I love the way you portray their relationship and the way she understands Warren. The introduction hooked my attention, and the quirky dialogue impressed me. I can't wait ...
Jan 4, 2008 -
Re: 273rd Squadron Chapter 1 Revised
Thanks for the review. This is my first entry on here, and it was converted from email, chat, and l33t speech. Your commentary gave me the idea to narrow it ...
Jan 3, 2008 -
Re: Honor #2
You did a good job with transitioning from place to place and the story seems almost real. However, the first scene was a bit fast paced and a bit more ...
Jan 2, 2008