Nightfall

This was pretty fantastic. It was truly an entertaining read! The rhythm was a bit wonky, but it was still really easy to read and I liked it. Good stuff! ...

This poem was really beautiful! It was kind of confusing; did it have a rhyme scheme or not? Sometimes you rhymed, but in the beginning you didn't, but if it's ...

Meese make great subject matter! I really liked this poem; awesome work!

Thanks for the help, guys. I fixed it up a little. Good advice; I'll remember it. ~Nightfall

Again, something from awhile ago that I took another look at. Fortune: Halt for love, But stop for fear; Never will you Find hope here! Love to live But hope ...

I wrote this poem a long time ago, and cleaned it up a bit, but it's kind of abstract. I guess I was kind of weird. Eyes: I cannot resist ...

I love your concept, and your writing style is really cute! It was a good story with a lovely little lesson, and I liked it a lot. Sometimes, though, your ...

This was really amazing! It was a great use of imagery and expressed a really passionate opinion that came through. The abstract use of words like "sipped a soul" made ...

I thought this was pretty great. Couplets are hard, but you did a pretty good job. Flow is always a nasty pain, and yours could use a little work (as ...

Well, first of all, I wanted to read it because it had something like an accordian in it, but it turned out to be really deep and cool. (Which is ...

I loved your poem because it had a really nice lesson in it. This is my favorite part: And that is when I knew why we must go our different ...

I LIKED IT! I also saw it when it was..... normal. ^-^ I also sat next to you at the time, so I don't know why I'm telling you this ...

This poem was REALLY COOL! I loved the repetition and overall, it was super cool.

Ah! Quite grand! I love your topic (isn't the devil fun to work with ^-^); it can be a tough subject because it can get cliche really easily, but you ...

This was excellent! The ending was oh, so clever (which you already know) and I thought that it was a really great fairytale sort of style with the right touch ...