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Thanks Rach, that was helpful! As for the melodramtic-ness, I suppose that's how I write. It's something I delight in - It's my writer's voice, if you like. I know ...

There was a young prince, George the Great, Who swore like a bloody first mate. His mother's last hope was to call in the Pope - He gave George an ...

Haha, I used to do this with my best friend all the time. Our favourite word, I'm pretty sure, was "Tempersir" Which was our teacher when he was mad. Also ...

What a beautiful piece of writing. This part alone makes me cringe with some kind of isolated feeling: "This was where dreams were shattered. The tangle of limbs, clothes haphazardly ...

That was really helpful StoryWeaver! Thank you so much :) I'll be putting the next part up in the next few minutes, so I'll attempt to attach a link. Thank ...

Thanks Dogs!!

incredible! I love the colours!

Haha Jas, I love how you're so blunt. And I didn't really take offence, cause hey, I'm a story writer, not a poet. Just thought I'd give it a go! ...

That's cool Jess, and good luck with your finals!

Thank you so much Rach, It's so helpful to get advice like that, and you've pointed out things, that to be honest, I didn't notice before. I'll probably be reviewing ...

Aw, thank you Sindhu98! It was my first poem in ages, so I was a little trepiditious about it, but thank you for your encouragment and I'm glad you enjoyed ...

Hey Mikko, That's a cute poem. Emotive, deceptive, and quite clearly sad. It made me almost cry there. Stanzas that mention things like, "As she hugged them with her little ...

That's so encouraging Michaeld, thank you! I actually finished reading 'How To Kill A Mockingbird' not too long ago, so my character was probably influenced a little. You're well on ...

Thanks Hudz96! It's encouraging that you like it, and thank you for pointing out that there are mistakes. It's always helpful to have other insight on your work. NightWriter x