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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: For not a moment, time did halt

    Hi Sybil, thank you for the review. I%u2019m glad that you liked it so much ^^

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: For not a moment, time did halt

    (...wow, that reply turned out a mess xD Sorry if that's really difficult to read; I'm not sure what happened there)

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: For not a moment, time did halt

    Hi Vivian, thanks for the review. In reply to your points %u2013 I did mean to use %u201Csomnolently%u201D rather than solemnly xP The missing %u201Cthe%u201D was also intentional, as the ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter one of a book I'm working on

    ...okay, you might want to ignore this. Sorry for the double post. =/ I hope the review helps, though. ^^

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter one of a book I'm working on

    Hey mnkeygrl11, This is quite interesting, and I enjoyed reading it. I like your ideas; the supernatural camp, the fights, etc. I’m particularly interested about Nora - who is she, ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: The Case of Matthew

    Sorry about the italics in the last part of the review. xD I'm not sure what happened there, but I can't edit it

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: No Man's Girl

    Thank you so much, Murt! You're awesome, even more so for this review. I can't wait to read your story, so that I can review it in turn. *shade-fives* 8) ...

    Feb 21, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Boy's Bones

    Thanks so much, Stella. This really helped. :) ~Misty x

    Feb 20, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: No Man's Girl

    Thanks so much, AJ. I can see all your points pretty perfectly and I really appreciate your honesty! I was pretty iffy about this piece myself, and it really helps ...

    Feb 20, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 4

    Hey there Blues, I’ve read all of the chapters you’ve posted so far now, but I thought I’d start by reviewing this chapter since the previous chapter have quite a ...

    Feb 4, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Miranda

    @xDudettex, Thank you so much for the welcome and the review. I completely agree with just about everything that you've said and will definitely take your suggestions on board to ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Fear

    Thank you @paraperson, I'm really glad you like it and your tips are really helpful. I'll definitely use them to try and improve this sometime soon! :) ~MorningMist~

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Fear

    Thank you @Chicken, I'm really glad you liked it. ;) ~MorningMist~

    Oct 12, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Miranda

    Thank you @limegreenleopard. I'm glad you liked it! :) I agree, poor Ester; it was just too easy to kill her. Thank you so much for the review, ~MorningMist~

    Oct 12, 2011


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