Niebla

Hey Qara, Nice prologue! After reading the first Chapter and realising afterwards (typical me) that there was a prologue, I had to read it. And although it has explained quite ...

Hey sillypinkpony37, I'm not quite sure how I feel about this story. It's a difficult topic to write about, and although you certainly could have done a much worse job ...

Hey Carina, Wow. This was heart-breaking -- especially once you'd explained where the idea had come from. As you said, may they all rest in peace. I'm going to try ...

Hey sillypinkpony37, MorningMist here with both some praise and some constructive criticism! I liked this piece, but I think it could be improved by a lot. It's quite a short, ...

Hey highwordman, I love your descriptions! Although there's not all that much action or dialogue in this story, you set the scene well. It was vivid, clear and unique in ...

Hey Nike, Well -- although I agree with a lot of things in this piece, I don't really know whether I would class it as fiction or not. It is ...

Hey gloss! I definitely agree with Rosey that you've got the outline of a poem here, but it feels quite unfinished. First of all, how about seperating this poem out ...

Hey PinkBlues, This isn't bad! It's a clear, good quality photograph, and I like the subject. It's very seasonal. However, I do think that there are some points which could ...

Sounds good! Spark, I agree with you. I think we should set personal/team goals every day and also put up how many reviews we do each day too. HPR, sounds ...

Hey lovestowrite! I remember reading the Vampire Academy books quite a while ago now. I think that you've stayed quite true to the story with this piece, yet you've made ...

Actually, I do agree with Spark that we could do with a strategy. Blues, yours is fair enough but I don't think my WRFF is even anywhere in the first ...

Hey TheBlackSheep, Wow! This is really stunning. I didn't expect to see something so well drawn and vivid when I decided to look at this topic -- but it was ...

Hey JustisMarez, To be completely honest with you, I have mixed feelings about this piece. While it isn't badly written in any way, I don't think it has many of ...

Hey gummiebaerrs, Turns out that the 20% of you who didn't think this was complete rubbish was right! This is really quite good -- it's well written, especially considering that ...

Hey ajt, My honest opinion? I think it's really good. :smt001 It has a very slightly disturbing element to it, but really no more disturbing than life is itself. I ...