Niebla

Hey Snarkhunter, While I liked this, I have to admit that I didn't get a very definite feeling of this actually being a poem while reading it. It almost just ...

Hey ScarlettWinters, Wow. I love this! It was enchanting, and it really drew me in. I love your writing style more than I can say, and I found that this ...

Hey Celtica, Well - I have to admit that this was not what I expected at all! Considering what the title of this piece was, I'm really not sure what ...

Hey feodora, My first thought when reading this was that although some small parts could probably use a little tweaking, I absolutely loved the way this is written. The writing ...

Hey AJT, Wow. That's all I can say - I love your poetry so much. It always has such a clear and beautiful sense of rhythm, and you create such ...

Hey Qara, As before with the other parts, I love this. It's so engaging, and I really want to read more. I'm really kind of sad that this is the ...

Hey ajt, (Sorry for the lateness of the review.) Anyway, to get to the point -- this is great! It creates such a vivid impression of the place you are ...

Hey SpeedyPencil, I'm torn about whether I truly like this piece or not, to be honest. I like the way you've written it generally, but at the same time, I ...

Hey madimonster, What a sad story. Still, I like the twist you've put into it -- I've read so many stories about girls with leaukemia, but you made this one ...

Hey Green Team! Welcome, ajt! I'm glad you're in our team. It's true that I did a lot of reviews the first day, but don't worry -- none of you ...

He casualentries, I like your writing style! However, I did notice quite a few mistakes which I'll try and correct below so that you can change them. 1) Although this ...

Hey BlueAfrica, Wow -- I love this! The contrast creates a very interesting picture -- one of those I just can't stop looking at. For an experiment, it certainly did ...

Hey Murt, I love that ornament! I also love the idea of the picture -- it's very festive. I also love the individuality of it -- you don't see pictures ...

Hey Sakshi, I think that this has potential. I caught quite a bit of what could be a really nice poem there, but at the same time, I found a ...

Hey Qara, Aww. The ending of this left me feeling kind of sad -- but to be honest, with a lot more respect for Ksenia than I had at the ...