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Re: Nobody else
I like the concept of the story, and think this will make a nice novel; carry on with it. However, I noticed a few little mistakes even in this snippet. ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Mister Punkin Head
I really like this :) It's definitely really appropriate for the day. It's not overly horrific, no, but I like how you've painted his mouth dripping with what looks like ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Stray From The Light
Hello, I really like this! I love the way you've written it, from the point of view of the mare. I found some of the sentences in italics a bit ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: YWS Screencaps
Typos gone awry...Pay special attention to Sol's comments! (As if the big red circles around them wasn't enough :wink: ) funnyscreen2.png I tried not to upload this, I really did, ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: One Night Only
My completely honest opinion? This poem is okay- not one of the best ones I've read, but not too bad either. I think I prefer the beginning, to be honest, ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Tears for a Wolf
Tears for a Wolf Morning dawned upon them, bathing the tiny village in golden, luxurious sunlight. Slowly, an array of sounds began to fill the streets. Curtains were drawn, doors ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Where do you write?
I mostly write in my room, at my own laptop. I have a small desk in my room so that I can write on paper if I like, but generally ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: October 31st!
My plans are to wrap up nice and warm, get a mug of hot chocolate, and watch horror movies alone. Then: to laugh at said horror movies until I get ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Lost
I like the general idea of it and think it could be quite nice. However, there are a few things which just don't quite make sense to me and I ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Tense
I realise that this isn't written very well and needs a lot of work...I wrote it quite quickly, within a few minutes. It means quite a lot to me and ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: How do you stick to an idea?
This is one of my biggest problems: that even when I have a well-formed idea in my head, once I'm part of the way through it, I usually end up ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: Write the worst poem you can.
Well...you asked for it. Here is my two minute worst poem of all time :) When the cheese takes over the earth Then the earth won't suffer so much When ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Nuts
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Souru (Started)
Name: Aria Sterling Age: 16 Gender: Female Appearance: Aria is tall and fairly slim, with a face often so seemingly distant and cold that those who catch a glance of ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Souru (Started)
Hey, is it alright if I join? I don't have time to fill in a profile now, but if it's alright I can do one by tomorrow. :) ~MorningMist~
Oct 17, 2011