Niebla

Hey Toripopppy, First of all, welcome to YWS! You'll find that it's amazing here. Secondly, I loved your story. I love the vivid images your writing creates, and the beauty ...

Hey GawravMehta, I really enjoyed reading this! But before I give a general review, I'll just point out a few minor errors I noticed in this. A teenage girl with ...

Hey Audy, Could I request a review for this? It would really help if you could give it a general/fairly in depth review. If it's too long and you don't ...

Banned for having a palindromic number of posts!

Well done @ancientforever! I finished too ... by the end of November, I had just a little over 70,000 words. This was my first year of ever even doing Nano ...

This is brilliant! Any limerick beginning with "there was an American dude" is worth reading. I can't see any mistakes/problems with this at all, and it really did make me ...

Hey ladymarmalade, I loved this story! I noticed a few minor errors, but overall I thought the writing was really good. It was deep and drew you into the story, ...

Hey SmylinG, Could I request a review? It would really help if you could give this a quick review. It's kind of long so I feel horrible asking for one ...

Hey saphira10, First of all - I do like your writing. I think that this story overall needs a bit of revising because I noticed a few minor mistakes and ...

Hello there! I know this is rather a long story, and that it's far from perfect, but I'd really appreciate it if someone took the time to read and review ...

Fortune had kept the sharp, jagged shard of mirror for what felt like a century in its secret hiding spot under her mattress. There had been many nights like this ...

Personally, I'm with it. But as others said it's definitely not a black and white issue. There are lots of grey areas and lots of different opinions, all of which ...

Raindrops, rinsing the already barren roads. Each little droplet of water filled the void inside her heart a little more, making the pain harder and harder to bear, until it ...

No, never. Then again I've only been a member since October so I don't really know many people around here yet. :wink:

Have a trolley race (no, I'm not that immature :wink: but it's an idea). Re-arrange the tins of baked beans. (I assume Walmart has those- right?) Make a fish puppet ...