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Okay, so this WRFF thread is closed for now. I'm busy with exams and things at the moment, but I'll probably reopen sometime in the summer. ;) Hey everyone, I've ...

Make what you want of it. At first I wasn't sure whether to post this or not - generally, anything I write in first person tends to sound off somehow. ...

Hey tigershark17, I think you've done a really good job with this poem. In poetry, misery and self-harm seems to be quite a reoccuring subject, and that bothers me - ...

Hey ReisePiecey, Lovely. It didn't immediately hit me that the poem was about drug abuse, but by the last stanza I was starting to realise. And even throughout the entire ...

Hey Jagged, Wow! I really, really love this. It has such a mysterious, beautiful feel to it. You create such vivid images with your words, and with this poem you've ...

Here are some song lyrics I wrote rather on a bit of a whim. Looking back quite a few of them seem quite disturbing. I don't know ... they're not ...

Icy car tyres, stained with red. Awakening followed unconsciousness; everything had changed.

John Venezuela, a stolid man with bulky muscles and nose the size of a small chimney, liked nothing more than to stand in front of house windows with his nose ...

As-Matik McSpoon. Tangerine Gork. Jack Daniels. Sorry ... couldn't resist. :wink:

Hey Abigail, First of all - welcome to YWS! I hope you find everything you're looking for here. I read this story and I really liked it. I particularly liked ...

I don't have much of a review for you as I really can't find much wrong with this at all - but I really wanted to tell you how much ...

In a way this is quite a simple poem, but as others have said, quite true and relatable to many people. I liked it because it had a distinct sense ...

This is brilliant - especially for a rough draft! As it's quite a long story I wasn't sure if I should take the time to read and review it or ...

Hey Blankmind, I read this and I really liked it so I thought that I'd take a moment to comment on it. Like shiney1 said, some aspects of it make ...