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Re: The Charm of Deception- Chapter One, Part Two
Hey, I loved your story so far, I just wanted to say a few things, "...I'd tried before." doesn't sound right, I think it would've sound better with I've instead ...
Jul 23, 2013
Hey, I loved your story so far, I just wanted to say a few things, "...I'd tried before." doesn't sound right, I think it would've sound better with I've instead ...
Jul 23, 2013
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