Nibroc

A very interesting storyline - I have to say, it definitely has potential. Not that it's incredibly original in itself, but you could do something with it. My main concern ...

Awesome! Any slip-ups meter-wise are more than made up for in raw hilarity. Some of those rhymes crack me up uncontrollably. Love it. Just love it.

As an avid sci-fi reader, I have to say that the idea behind your story appeals to me - a society overrun by (superhuman? mutated?) wolves, with the humans as ...

Call me a traditionalist, but I don't know if I completely "get" this modernized haiku style. Generally (as far as I know), haiku deal with more natural themes, such as ...

Hey, thanks Kamas for the quick reply. Sorry about what I said about age. I wanted to apologize for my potentially degrading comments directed towards 14-year-olds. The realization that you ...

I want to read this book so bad! I read the zombie survival guide and really enjoyed it, and I've been dying to get my hands on WWZ. Your review ...

Structure. You need it. Being somewhat of a traditionalist where it comes to poetry, I sometimes have a hard time "getting" free verse. But this is beyond free-verse. I'm not ...

Stella , thanks for the review! It really helped me focus on a few things I need to work on for next time. However, I must beg your forgiveness if ...

Thanks, Kamas. Very helpful. I did however have a few, perhaps random, questions (dealing primarily with age issues). First one: is there an age limit on the site? I read ...

Hey, thanks all of you for the comments/criticism! Rose , I'm glad you liked it. To clarify though, you said that the "burnt ice" thing is a bit of a ...

THE VESSEL OF MY MIND By Nibroc I sail on a ship bound for lands lost in time, Cutting white lines of foam in an ocean of black; The lights ...