Niamh

This ends a bit randomly, but I'm trying to find the actual story, and not just what I'm making up as I go along, so bear with me. Hopefully I'll ...

That is really talented for a ten year old. Very fun to read!

I really liked this. It was very ironic. Stories with an ironic twist are always fun to read! That's really cool that you live in India too! Good job!

I loved it! I love Celtic Faery myths, and the Kelpie is among my favorite. I really think you caught the essence of what and who the Kelpie is--excellent. The ...

Thanks to both of you for the advice!

Really brilliant. I love the Crusades. I can't wait to read more!