NiallXoldham

Shamus began to stir slowly, his body feeling so heavy and combersome, as if his body was encased in taffy. His own clothes felt so uncomfortable and scratchy, like they ...

Shamus Gio Peavey is a typical 20 year old human. In love with music, anything loud and offensive. Has no idea what is going on or where he came from, ...

I agree with the previous post. The sentences may appear next to each other but they don't eem to paint a picture like the introduction should do you know? It ...