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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Historical Fiction Re: Time Jump: TEASER

    I loved it! It is a great start. I love the idea of the plot. The dialogue helped to develop your characters but i do think that you should add ...

    Aug 9, 2013


/I think, today,/ he thought back, /the important fact is that I don't/ need /to be better than him. He can just be a person. And I... I can just be one too./
— Adolin (Wind and Truth by Brandon Sanderson)