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Granted, but now you are a total wreck physicly and mentally you eat too much which makes you fat and even more depressed then you die of a kidney faliure ...

Hmm I hope this is in the right place... I'm just wondering how does everyone here get rid of their Writers Block?

Apparently I shouldn't be reading R rated but i dont care lol, while i understand the title being called Owned, I think you can keep your style wih a different ...

No order here 'coz i don't know. The Subtle Knife Freeglader The Winter Knights The Hobbit Firesong Amelet of Samarkand Slaves of Mastery The Wind Singer Magyk The Da Vinci ...

I love reading your poems lol they are great... This is no exception ^^

Sounds like my kind of book! One point- -Where have you guys calls a male voice."Gathering fire wood,Raoul."- -Where have you guys- makes no sense and isnt in speech marks- ...

Granted but it costs someone else their life, who was your mother. I wish i had a country of my own!

Hi everyone ^^

Good ^^ I like your "bad guy"

I liked it, though i couldn't see a total connectedness with faith, i found it more to do with life, but perhaps some could say life is fait, or faith ...

Wow you seem to like Star Wars alot hehe, it's a very good poem- I'm not a StarWars expert so I couldn't give you feed back there, but i got ...

Thanks :)

Is No. 2 in any of your work?

And yeah i'll check that website out

Though sometimes focusing description in certain areas can be effective to make it more exciting, scary etc. However i think i might have failed miserably at that.