Newguy120

Thank you guys for all of your reviews! I've went and edited, hoping to have made better the faults you found. Just a few things regarding what I did. GreatEscape ...

Audreeyy! I've come to review your storryy!! Well. The best place to start is the beginning (unless you are telling an epic or you are watching star wars, that is) ...

“You’re late,” Mr. Stock said dryly. “I know,” I remarked, taking from him the pleasure of showing off his authority. I wasn’t about to let him intimidate me. As he ...

I as well agree with both of the replies before this one, but something else i noticed is a small part that could be slightly confusing unless you stopped to ...

Hey Audrey! I'm Jared! Of course you knew that! Hmm.. I should let other people know this. So, since you've already looked over most of the rules, I'll explain the ...

Thank you! xD

>.> Okie Dokie! April it is (Noticed the fact your name was april about two seconds after posting)

I really like it. It shows a lot of feeling, and you are doing well in expressing your thoughts in different ways. However, to me it seems a bit wordy. ...

Hey peanut! (Mind if I call you peanut?) Thank you for the welcome! I'm looking forward to see what people think of my writing O.O

Hehe. Hi guys! Like the title of this topic? Yes, usually when something random is said I just blow it off, but in this case I thought I would point ...