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Re: Eyes
Love this very interesting narrative, I will love the ending more elaborated with a moral lesson and also to revisit the main theme of the story: "EYES" Will their eyes ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: Feeling SAD
I really like it! It will be more compelling if you introduce the feeling of hope for those who will be identified. Maybe asking some well taught questions will induce ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: It's Better
Hello there, I love it! Specially the second part, it looks for me like two separate stories The first part you are talking to yourself, like with your inner thoughts ...
Sep 10, 2014