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Re: LMS VI: Starlight In The Wind
Shadows Lost Between The Roots Sunflower fields overgrown with daisies and poppies that strangle the soil. Old pots cracked and roots all tangled and knotted like twisted strands of hair ...
Sep 19, 2022 -
Re: LMS VI: Starlight In The Wind
They Can Take My Life There’s boy in my class everyone says are cool and people like me they’d run right through. There’s rainbows they wish they could bottle and ...
Sep 18, 2022 -
Re: LMS VI: Starlight In The Wind
To Hunt A Buck
Sep 5, 2022 -
Re: LMS VI: Starlight In The Wind
Contents Week 1 Submission (5 September 2022): To Hunt A Buck ( 27 Lines ) Week 2 Submission (18 September 2022): They Can Take My Life ( 27 Lines ) ...
Sep 5, 2022 -
Re: LMS VI: Starlight In The Wind
LMS VI: Starlight In The Wind As a Bard my themes will be nature and being outdoors (including space, oceans etc.).
Sep 5, 2022 -
Re: Lim's Poetic Notes
Ooo! This is great! I really didn’t notice it until after I read the second version but without the function words it sounds really nice. I think like you said ...
Jul 11, 2022 -
Re: Ask a therapist!
Thank you so much, Carlito (Again...) You've helped me a lot! I was really interested when you spoke about flashbacks, it could be an exciting tool to use. I am ...
May 28, 2022 -
Re: Ask a therapist!
Thank you so much Carlito This helped so much! I just had one or two more questions to ask. Could his trauma be a factor for an earlier onset age? ...
May 27, 2022 -
Re: Ask a therapist!
Hey Carlito I've been writing from the viewpoint of a 14-year-old boy who has started experiencing hallucinations... these rapidly get worse throughout the book. He has recently been forced to ...
May 14, 2022 -
Re: Lim's Thread
That actually makes perfect sense. Thank you for letting me know why.
Apr 27, 2022 -
Re: Lim's Thread
No need to worry, Lim. I'll try and find someone else to review, quickly I hope. One question if that's alright. I'm a tiny bit confused where you specify this ...
Apr 27, 2022 -
Re: Lim's Thread
Hi Lim I'd really thankful if you would review my poem: It's been in the green room for a few days now, it's a rant I guess and a little ...
Apr 26, 2022 -
Re: The Uber Writer's Block Thread
Update: Writer's Block is gone. A few tips: * Keep writing. No matter what. Even a random poem is invaluable if means you wrote something that day. Keep on doing ...
Mar 14, 2022 -
Re: How do I describe the English countryside?
Thank you. I have decided on a specific place but will still do a lot of research as you suggest. :twisted: (Smiles)
Feb 20, 2022 -
Re: The Uber Writer's Block Thread
I am having a terrible time... last month I had planned to reach the start of Chapter 6 and I'm still stuck on Chapter 4! I haven't been writing anything ...
Feb 20, 2022
