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Thanks Jabber! I honestly think if I were to write any genre, it would be more of R.A.P, although i'm not musically talented. But i put it under the lyrical ...

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you enjoyed it. I will work on the grammar, that's a must! Ha ha. But when I think of narrow in this poem, ...

Thanks Em, again much appreciated!

I love that a lot better actually, I might change that. Thank you so much, much appreciated!

Thank you for being honest Em, and i know my grammar is terrible, lol. I really need to work on that especially if I want to take this seriously. I ...

Thanks Walker, I never really thought they were poems, i always thought they sounded more like lyrics, but im not musically talented lol. So i thought poetry sounded better. I ...

Thank you! Much appreciated especially for the honest feedback, I need to work on my grammar lol sometimes i just ramble when I write and don't look for my mistakes ...