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I am yours. Your eyes are an abyss. It's your, not you're. You're showing me that you can apply the rules of 'Your' and 'you're' in the last line :] ...

NATHAN ;) Love zee writing duude but you don't have to be soo depressing. Next time we're in the hub for maths or Summet, you WILL write somthing cheery-(full?). Hate ...

I completely with Yatta!'s comments. The speaker i'm assuming is either a mother telling her child not to let others influence her action (I apologise if i'm wrong) or a ...

You contain my thoughs from morn til nigh From your blessed looks to your voice so high You bruise the soul that lies deep within A heart so kind, i ...

First of all, the poem portrays a beautifal image of a person sitting on a window ledge, trying to draw. The dramatic ending of and I fade into thoughts of ...

I wrote this in like ten mintutes :) It was 'in the moment'. **runs off to the chat rooms** Your potent and sweet aroma kindles my lonely heart. Your rustic ...

I would love one pleease :) Image: somthing sunny and cute Text: A witty quote :) Extra: Love and care please :) LOVEYOU paha ;)

I was inspired by Stella Thomas to write this prologue and hopefully write an entire a novel if this proves well. Also some title idea's would be great. :) It's ...

A lovely little poem i think. The pattern of rhythm is quite complex as ebony put and i think it makes such a short poem seem quite substantial. The subject ...

Well I love this short poem. It fits with the holiday :) This poem is a little cliche but somehow that makes the poem. The sincerity of the wonder, the ...

'Maybe if I don't look at it,it will go away.Wash away with all my other worries that I've thought about today. Fade into the background, walk into the dark. Take ...

This is apart of my 'Dearest Death' Project, based on the life of a character named Cassie. She recieves a love letter from a character , revealed in my next ...

I like how this poem reveals the true subject only at the end. The slow progression in such a short poem is really good. The only things i would critique ...

I completely agree with RedBird. The ideas are great. If you edit it as suggested, this poem could brilliant. Don't doubt your poetry, plus practice makes perfect. The last stanza ...

Knock, Knock! "Cassie... GET OUT!" I could hear my sisters shouts muffled to a mere whisper through the pulsing rock music and the thick Oak door. You there Paramorekid ?? ...