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Re: A love that slipped
This poem carries the weight of grief in such a quiet, haunting way that it feels almost too real to read casually. It speaks not of a dramatic breakup or ...
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Re: Self-Portrait
One line that really gutted me was: “Replace the part of you / that smells the flowers.” It’s such a small moment, but it hurts. It’s like being told to ...
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Re: Fireworks and Fireflies
This poem hit me in that quiet place you don’t realize is bruised until someone presses gently on it. I came into it expecting something nostalgic or patriotic, but what ...
Jul 6, 2025 - Re: Raisa tries to play with the living children Jul 6, 2025
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Re: Unfinished writings
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Jul 6, 2025
This one hit a little too close to home. The way the character Lisa feels like she’s living in someone else’s life was written so clearly and honestly. The yellow ...
