Nerrvany

I was going to review this but I'm no good with critiquing song lyrics, but I just wanted to stop by and say how much I like your writing, the ...

Hi! You’ve made a heck ton of improvements and I really like how your view is clear right from the beginning, so all critiques aside I still really love your ...

This is beautiful! Arken is freaking adorable and I love him.

I really love this poem, though the first and fifth verses feel like they throw off the cadence. I think the first line is missing a beat and the fifth ...

"it's /space/ magic" I'm laughing, that's beautiful.

Also, it took me a little bit, but I'm getting the hang of understanding Edna a little bit more. It's tricky how she says one thing but her motivation is ...

I'm so confused. How do you manage to keep making your characters better and better? My reaction has gone from "it's that orderly" to "!!!!!" and I suspect it's going ...

I have nothing to complain about. It feels like you found your stride again, the dialogue flows beautifully, and I'm absolutely in love with the pure irony of the whole ...