NerdBurga

Wow, this was a really interesting passage to read. I was completely sucked from the real world to the world you had created. I also really liked the creative names ...

This was a bitter sweet poem. On the one hand, it showed your care and your deep personal thoughts for this girl. On the other hand, it was of course ...

I really really really enjoyed reading this. A whole lot of the poems (mine included) are often quite depressing, so this was a fun and refreshing read. I think there ...

I really loved the thought you put into this poem. I think the rhyming was a bit strained in some parts, and in this review I'll show you just what ...

You have good ideas for this story, I'd just like to give you a few tips to improve it and have a nice polished final copy. The red is corrections, ...

It was a Mexican stand off at it's best. I stared her down. She returned the stare. It was a battle of will and intimidation. I refused to step down. ...

By the way, I know you are worried that no-one got it, but I understood it perfectly. Stop worrying!

I loved this! Loved it! I would never have thought of this kind of idea for a poem, you have awesum creativity :) I have to agree that the second ...

I totally agree with adding more to it. I think if you are able to keep up that descriptive lagnuage you should easily be able to make a really touching ...

I reall liked this, I thought it was nice and simple, you didn't need a whole lot to put an image in my mind and to let me know what ...

Look at the window, look out at the sun And tell me what you see Do you see heat, love and passion Or just a ball of gas hanging over ...

Yeah so I really like it.. :) I think it has beautiful language and great metaphors. One thing is I can see why some might not get what it's about. ...

I once was a toughened Scout, Learning knots and survival skills. We'd learn how to put up a tent, And how to hike on the hills. Then we'd put our ...

Wow, ok I really liked this :) I think one thing about your poem is that so many people can relate to the message you're trying to convey here, so ...

Ok, so thanks for putting up your poem :) I think it really has potential, I just want to point out a few things. Some tempestuous lyrics, like after-rain mud ...