NeoAnderson

wow! these photos were amazing. you have lot of talent. you could easily capture the beauty. i am itching to see more of your photos.

wow! this was a great poem 1. it was very creative 2. it was funny 3.even though it was short i enjoyed it a lot 4.loved your spelling mistakes there ...

i really liked the poem. 1. some rhymes were very good. 2. it is short but it still is able to convey so much 3. i think a longer poem ...

im not sure how to title, i wasn't really sure how to finish it; so i just left it. untitled Nothing means anything, No maker of sense. The trader of ...

You are nothing but a fairytale Is fiction not a crime? A gripping tale of courage, Your lies are like a chime. If you where as noble,(were) As your caracter ...

its a great poem. it has a good flow. 1.i loved the way you started with pessimism but ended with optimism. keep writing

When I look up at the stars, I just don't see little lights. I see a would of possibilities, (would should be world) That can take flight.( beautiful) I know ...

this is a good poem but it can be improved 1. i think the lines were too short. 2. the topic you have picked is amazing. 3. i think you ...

it was an OK poem. the subject is interesting but this poem can be improved on 1. you used the word series in the second line. it doesn't make sense. ...

this poem is really mysterious. i could not understand what you were trying to convey in this poem. there were a few grammatic errors here and there. i think you ...

its a nice poem. i liked it. but for some reason i couldn't relate to it so much. dont worry its, not a bad poem, but a little more practice ...

its a good poem. but i think the ending can be improved. keep on writing!

this is a good poem. you have expressed your emotions very well. i cant imagine what your going through,but every emotion that comes will in due time, pass.

i really liked this poem. i can totally relate to it. i think the flow of the poem can be improved. putting more rhyming words may help but its your ...

great poem. it simple but it is very good. i liked and i found it funny too. waiting for more work from you.