NeoAnderson

hey, i liked the idea of the poem. it was made in a very different manner which i liked. 1.i think you overused your hyphens. 2. i would have liked ...

I looked out of the window of the airplane that I was sitting in. The sight that I saw really shocked me. The wing of the plane was on fire. ...

wow! i really liked this poem. seriously, i did like it. i liked it bacause it had a really smooth flow, and the words you chose were simple yet efficient. ...

I haven’t seen you since june, I remember our fatal kiss under the moon, My love for you was too great, But now, it’s too late. I wish, I could ...

The doctor says, i have an infection, that i'm taken over by affection, for you. I can't imagine my life without you, everyday i hope to meet you, i'm stung ...

You blame other's for the mistakes you did, even though your own glass is covered by a lid. You think you are the best, but you are no better than ...

this poem is good for a first try! you have talent in poetry so keep writing!

i liked the poem 1. you lost way a bit by talking about churches 2.i liked the flowery alliteration 3.you used some great words 4. it was very creative 5. ...

This poem was actually inspired by my bird's death, this morning You can throw me in a dirty pot; make me into a boiling stew; But the pain I give ...

ok, I know the rhyme scheme is messed up but I like it this way. It gives it a twist. I think this is about becoming a teenager, but truly, ...

Would you kiss me if I said I loved you? Would you hug if I said I cared? if I said I hate you would you shed a tear?( the ...

I lie here in this dreaming state. Too often had I tempted fate.( nice rhyming words) He came for me, dripping blood. A pointed finger, I understood.(i really loved these ...

Love is a malicious gift,(a great usage of words) Delicious torment,(cliche, but still good) A toxic kiss.(great) Love, from whence this poision drips,( good line) Destroys my will, My will ...

Rain has many voices, Those we cannot hear, Though when we truly listen, Whispers whislte with the wind.(the spelling is whistle) Though many cannot understand, Some have the heart to ...

Dear God, I hate my life, I'm forced to live with a man, who will not admit I'm his wife.(i think making will not to won't will improve the flow ...