Nemeia

Another amazing review! Thank you so much! Chapter 3 should be up by Wednesday evening, if not sooner, so I'll hope you'll keep on the lookout for it! Like I ...

Thanks for another review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Her name being Eva wasn't intentional. I guess I just didn't read through it well enough, to find all the old ...

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for catching some more errors, I'll go back and fix those tonight. Originally Evangaline's name was going to be Eva, but I decided that ...

Awesome! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Both your reviews have been incredibly useful and eye opening! Don't be afraid to go hard on me and be nit-picky, I appreciate the ...

It did indeed help, thank you for reading! I divided up the paragraphs as you said, and I agree it looks way better. Google docs apparently makes everything look really ...

Thank you for the wonderful review! I actually have three more chapters of this story written out and ready to be posted. I'll be doing some revewing tonight to get ...

I will consider removing the pictures, though a lot of published novels do have black and white pictures for chapter covers or important scenes. As for the large paragraphs, it's ...