Neemii

Note: There is a limb broken in this story. It's not described too graphically, so I didn't think it deserves an R rating, but if I'm wrong, please tell me ...

I... really rather liked this, but I can not explain why. Maybe because the imagery is enthralling or because the writing style is so amazing or because it basically sucked ...

I love the contrast between the narrative and the dialogue! However, the first sentence seems a little dry to me. I personally believe that first sentences are for drawing in ...

Neemii here (and if you see a Neemii on another site, it's probably me - I've yet to find a site where the name was taken), hello! I'm a writer ...