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Re: This Moment
there's a moment we live. we breathe. we feel alive. you feel subdued or is it seduced? only time can tell but right now in this moment my moment there ...
Feb 9, 2009 -
Re: Saving Me
I love love love "love" poems. If this is your first poem of this genre, then definitely keep it up. Also, good imagery. Awesome work!!!
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Lonely
I agree with the masses. This was good for your first poem, so definitely keep it up. Don't worry about being vague. It can sometimes leave more to the imagination. ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Thought & Feeling
To what do I owe this feeling? Whom do I appreciate? A gentle whisper of words so delicate They could break the very souls of men One touch of your ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Dreaming
Beneath the stars I lie Wrapped up in the world of you Covered in the warmth of your arms Hold me tight, don’t let go With each kiss I feel ...
Jul 24, 2008
