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Hey Kylan – Something it took me about two weeks of (intermittent) thinking to realise about your writing in the flash of space between thought and dream – something you ...

Hey Halycon - Something I feel I must enlighten you about poetry: it's not just about clever word choice, although that can certainly help gain a reader's attention and interest. ...

Jagged - I will begin by saying I have not fully read 'de profundis' - I mean, properly, slowly read it - but from first impressions, I remember preferring this ...

Kylan – How you managed to derive a poem out of *that* picture, I have no idea. But inspiration comes in the strangest of forms, so who am I to ...

Hey Penguin - A confession: it's been a while since I have read shorter poetry and liked it. It begins smoothly, interestingly. 'Today is for silence' immediately gave it a ...

Hey Hibiscus - So, this poem. Very down-to-earth (despite your topic). Childishly amusing, and matter-of-fact. It's nice to see how much more strongly your voice comes across here in this ...

What have you done ? I was planning on reacquainting myself with Mahabharata this weekend just for your poem and you - and you - I have no words to ...

Hey Hibiscus - There was a distinct clarity here, and yet simultaneously a heady breathlessness, the kind of way the lines slip through my fingers and I want to - ...

Hey Hibiscus - Been meaning to go over your pieces for a time now. So, this struck me as a poem just not hitting it right; there is none of ...

Hey Kylan - You have a right to be excited about this. I feel excited by it; I feel excited by the unravelling of it. I have little time, so ...

Hey Kylan - Feels like it's been a long time, no read. And it interests me how you have grouped these according to theme - something even larger to unravel, ...

Hey writtenacrossmysoul (what may I call you that is shorter?!) - Your phrasing and juxtaposition of ideas reminded me a lot of one of my favourite poets, Richard Siken. And ...

Hey sarg - It has indeed taken me some time to get here, but I am here. (You know, I read everything you write :)). And I must say that ...

Hi Hibiscus - So, something more graceful here, I see. Well, more interesting than the last I reviewed at any rate, and like one of your other ones, this had ...

Hey Kyllorac - Fitting that you should post this just as I was childishly falling in love with an old favourite rhyming poem. I will tell you this first off ...