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  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: i sneak in the back to avoid the front porch talk.

    Jesus, Hannah. You've gotten good.

    Apr 3, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: The Crimson Cardinal

    This. Waiting for a moment breaking against stained-glass windows. If, she said, you run. Beautiful. Some others lost focus strangely in the imagery towards some parts, but in this one, ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: striking too short at Greeks

    Yes, you people here really know how to capture my attention. Dreams. Could discuss them for days. I dreamed last night of roadmaps of glass in my palms, the dip ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: .

    the way muscle melds to bone, hollow and unpeeled. their own bodies arch for movement Mmm...hypnotic. Try 'melts.' Fuses? Crushes? Clips? Slips? Not sure, but I know what you're trying ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: multi-verse

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    Apr 2, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Is Poetry Dead?

    Define dead .

    Apr 2, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Happy Fun Ball

    like lolita, it draws me and screws me and spits me out in such a spasm of shame but still i ask for your audience by name and i get ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a love like ours is neolithic.

    Oh, lovely. Most on YWS will well you I leap up and down for double meanings, dualities. Clearly, you know how to handle them very effectively; the double-meaning created by ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: multi-verse

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    Apr 2, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: This Is Incredibly Silly

    Oh, I missed your poetry.

    Apr 2, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: je veux voir montrĂ©al

    sometimes I wonder how much death works, how much it would take to stop you from feeling your fingertips and the way the earth cracked in them, fractured finger bones. ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: multi-verse

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    Apr 1, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: I might be wrong: Kylan's NaPo

    Oh, God. If you post poetry here as delicious as this and some of your recent ones, you may find me vaguely incoherent for some time. Doing wonders for my ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: .

    Aha. It seems I need to read more Mary Oliver. While I dislike her pacing, enjambments, with there being something too slow and stagnant, if there's anything I can say, ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: nine lives & the lottery of dreams

    my work is generally short, I'm afraid. And I love you for it. I dream of ordinary things - chairs, lamps, rugs and doors; small nothings to furnish this great ...

    Apr 1, 2011


Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
— Thomas Gray