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I like all your poetry - so easy on the eyes and clever imagery - 'freshly baked rays,' 'puddles are like coins, cupcakes,' 'real April spreads outside / like a ...

Well, you are certainly improving. The fourth one was a delight to read - so easy on the eyes, and not overwhelming at all! Beautiful imagery used, and it has ...

Definitely sounds intriguing...what do you do when you get stuck in the forest? How do you cope? I love the concept of it. Putting that particular section of your first ...

I agree - slight cliche of Once upon a Time is what draws us in, and ultimately, if overused, will draw us out again. I think you're really on to ...

Short and sweet - I agree with perdido, that it needs to be ever-so-slightly reworked here and there for a bit more polishing, but otherwise very nice. Yes, I, too ...

Nice to meet you too, and I, too hope to learn Italian one day (Fr, Sp, Latin, Hindi should all help - oh, yeah, English too). I'm amazed at the ...

I always feel strange commenting after others, unsure whether I'm simply going to be repeating them or not. Even so, I thought I should let you know that I absolutely ...

It's interesting reading them all in one go, because you're definitely getting better and better as you progress. I liked the last two poems especially - sophisticated, while still accessible ...

Yes, like Hannah, I love your poetry. Seemingly spontaneous, yet beautifully crafted, it reminds me of what modern poetry should really look like. That near-perfect use of free verse and ...

Nice writing, and just wanted to say that I like the surprise ending of the first and third poems. The fourth confused me in terms of its rhyme - what ...

Sorry - they are most certainly NOT awful. Please do not apologise before - or after - you write. I actually really liked the second one - but I can ...

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About the whole copyright thing...I would love to put some of my work up, but I also may intend to publish a book of my works some time in the ...

I love it how when I read other people's poetry, I learn something each time. From you I have learnt that, even at the best of times, putting a whole ...