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Kylan, that shorter poem from April the ninth...I was crying as I read it. You've done it. You know what you're doing. You can write beautiful imagery, and make it ...

Cheers, Clo - funny, some didn't like my geometrical love ('Love never lived a line.'), I half-heartedly agree with everything about YouRL (and the whole point was to leave you ...

Banned for using a smiley face to ban me.

Thank you, Kylan, for the wonderful comments. I hope I have not overwhelmed you with mine.

You write some of the most amazing imagery and with one of the largest vocabularies in a single poem I have ever seen. I have reread all of your poems ...

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Banned for making my eyes hurt with all those colours.

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Wow, Clo, that was likewise some of the best advice I've received on my writing so far! I agree Tiempo is about a too-widely-covered topic, but I hoped with a ...

So...since I wrote such a humungous comment on the last one, I thought I'd better keep it short and sweet: I love the idea (and I know the quote sth ...

Okay, so I have read this six times and can confidently give a bit of advice. I'll break it up into two parts: 1. the IDEA behind your poem and ...

'Keychain' was sweet, tender, subtle. A hint of magic, a note of reality, once again you have waved that pretty wand of yours and conjured up a heartbreakingly simple image ...

Hi Antonia Louise. What's in a name, right? Like you, I love Shakespeare - favourite all round plays would have to be Merchant of V, King Lear, Macebth, and a ...

I don't quite understand what you mean by an 'adjectives assessment' - hey, note that I'm from NZ, and haven't got anything of the sort here. If it means what ...

Emma - That was a wonderful opening line: 'How did you do that?' My question to you exactly :). I was hooked, wanting to know more, on the edge of ...