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  • Lyrics Re: Harry Potter 3OH!3 song parody

    Well, I feel like I'm just repeating everyone else when I say this, but you KNOW it was incredibly funny. I am not a fan of reviewing lyrics, usually, because ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Other Re: 28 Questions

    Line after line of question makes each question lose its impact. I agree with Jagged, and I further think that you should take maybe two or three of those questions, ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Gigaman : A Very Bad Pun.

    Well...this was certainly another bit of light humour I've read this morning. I thought 'megaman, superman, gigaman' was a cool transition - and I'd love to see you do something ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Harry Potter & The Order Of The Pizza!

    I'm a big fan of Harry Potter - or was, a few years back - so I have to say, this is one of the funniest things I've read in ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: deus ex machina

    Hi Jagged! I'm Navita, and, I have to admit, it's been a while since I reviewed short stories, so I'm a little rusty...but I'm prepared to dive head-first in this ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: New and Confused

    Hi, I'm new too, so probably not the best person in the world to ask about this, but I'll help however I can. The points are for the comments you ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Navita's NaPo Poems

    Hey Clo - to answer your question about Fantaise-Impromptu - here's the FIRST reason why I wrote it: because I've done this - I snuck into a uni hostel's music ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Pleasure with a purpose (Demeter's NaPoWriMo 2010)

    Here. We. Go: April 9th : he's dressed himself for years now but still gets stuck in a cardigan I love the way all of your poems begin, and this ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: he woke this morning into yellow [Hannah]

    Clo has said it perfectly - your poems ARE hard to critique, because you've written them so thoughtfully. I feel like I'd simply be repeating myself if I said I ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Clo takes a hack at hack poetry.... hack [Clo's clumsy NaPo]

    Well. Well. Now that I see where you're getting inspiration from, I feel a bit better about reviews, which I WILL keep short and sweet, I WILL, I WILL. Right: ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: As I'm Living- Jas's PoMo thread

    Okay, I'll stop lurking and start writing a review: I have enjoyed all your poetry for its sweet simplicity. It brings up an image in my head that is at ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Navita's NaPo Poems

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    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Clo takes a hack at hack poetry.... hack [Clo's clumsy NaPo]

    Regarding the question of carriage...a long poem, indeed, and if I'm not careful, this reveiew could be even longer. But I'll try to be succint :) First impression? It reads ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Bubblewrapped's NaPoWriMo 2010

    Shortest review ever: I liked the sonnet because it was different - learning of love like learning knots, but I also found the idea rather...tasteless. More intellectual, I guess, and ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Navita's NaPo Poems

    Hey Helpful - that was...have a guess...very helpful indeed. In fact, I'm going to do a rewrite right now. Just to clarify a few things: that copper sulphate crystal was ...

    Apr 11, 2010


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein