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For something so short, I didn't really think it needed that much background as you gave us - unless the whole thing is part of the novel, of course, in ...

Cool avvie! I LOVE rabbits - so cute! Anyway...back to the point - I thought the title was awesome. The long and complicated nature is kind of what made it ...

I agree with Jas - more imagery would be AWESOME!!! And I LOVED the title - I am a big fan of quirky titles - so well done :D. I ...

Not that I judge a poem by its title, but I think a better title is definitely in order. I'd recommend having a look in 'All Community Forums' for 'Tips ...

Again, you really have a thing for beginnings. I liked that opening line - it was *BANG* for me, a perfect one-liner. :P Since this is just to help me ...

So...I know I said I'd only review the latest chapter, but I needed to get my thoughts in order first, so I thought I'd write some brief notes here, on ...

Umm...kind of haven't had a chance to look in other people's questions just yet, but I wanted to know if the 'quote of the week' and 'word of the week' ...

To be totally honest, Jagged, I did not enjoy this. Main reason was because it read like a long character description, a 'story-of-her-life' kind of piece as opposed to a ...

I see you've done a rewrite - it'd actually have been quite helpful for me if you'd left the original version up there (maybe in a spoiler?) just so I'd ...

Just wanted to say that the first thing that jumped out at me was the formatting of the poem - you know how you begin the poem with 'slender figure'? ...

I would agree with silented1 - the word 'nostalgia' in itself if such a nostalgic word, and makes me feel the emotion without you having to say much else! Your ...

Generally, I'd say that rhyming poems seem happier and more upbeat than free-verse which can tend to get quite serious and sombre. For this type of a poem, I'd recommend ...

I enjoyed the poem as a whole, and, most of all, I absolutely LOVED the idea of doing it as a play, with acts. I thought that it could have ...

Hey Maddy - I've got three other novels to review this weekend, and to do them all justice, I'm going to have to put yours on hold for now - ...

Counting down...seven days now...And I agree about that fantastical imagery, Kylan - I think I've been reading too much of your poetry, actually. It has somewhat hot-air-ballooned-up my style, I ...