Navita

otherwise cute little hobbit walking around in a hoodie with gang patches, tattoos, eyebrow and tongue piercings, and dreadlocks, shouting 'sup' brandishing a sword of some sort and talking in ...

Because. :D

Intermolecular forces are the forces of electrostatic attraction between molecules. All intermolecular forces are a result of this attraction between positive and negative particles. Weak van der Waal

Aww - come on guys, you know you love her! And I'll bet you're just dying to comment on her breathtaking ability to transport you to a place that is ...

In a way, I strongly dislike the idea that someone who is gifted at so many things is denied love - it annoys me. Possibly because I enjoy doing so ...

Kamas - thanks for the advice, and I'm definitely toning it down from here. I'm pretty sure the previous one was in my usual style, though. Jiggity - um...'practical over' ...

I agree with Skins, here. I'm not an expert at scripts, so I couldn't even begin to comment on the finer parts of this, but from the outset, it was ...

Gosh - that was so amazingly long! But of course, you are telling a story, and so you are perfectly entitled to make it that long. :D Usually, I'm not ...

I liked this. *clicks like button* I think it's interesting what happens when people we know, or kind of know, or know really well, die or disappear or do something ...

Wow. I really shouldn't be reviewing right now - but I couldn't help it; this was intense, and gripping. And, most importantly, it was fast-paced and mysterious. I liked the ...

That. Was. An. Immediate. WIN - yeah!!! :P I loved it - it was arresting, and different - oh, and great title, by the way (I thought I might have ...

Ouch. I didn't realise I was so far off the mark. Of course, in the first act, it makes perfect sense, now - I always had this idea that the ...

It's good to know you know exactly what you're doing with this. If disjointed is the effect you're going for - well done - you've done it! Just note that ...

Hey Skins - I wasn't really sure how much time I'd have for a review, and I was almost about to tell you it might not be possible soon...but I ...

In a weird way...I understand the character more here and I'm less attached to the story/plot itself. Kind of like...I like that you are expanding on who the character is, ...